Saturday, April 10, 2010

Progress... Movement... Query!

I haven't been to Moonstone Bay for a while, I'm a long, long distance from the Pacific Northwest, but a lot of good things have been happening with it. The first chapter has been completely re-written, jumping ahead to the action a bit quicker, and I've revised a few scenes throughout to emphasize his cousin's rambunctious nature.

I've also started a query that is progressing well, with an eye at officially starting to send it around by next week. That's one scary step closer to possibly making Smith and my mysterious fishing village a place that exists in more heads than my own.